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My Brother's Routine every day

My Brother's Routine every day 0wVp9

Mohammad is my only brother in blood. I was not good well with him until my father got cancer in his liver and died, then everything has changed and he became close to me. He is a computer teacher. He gets up at 7: 00 A. M to pick up his children at school. After that, he has breakfast in a restaurant which is bean cooked in Arabic way. Then he looks for passengers to pick up them to where they want to go. He works to get extra money because the life became too expensive. He goes to get his children back at 2 P. M then he gets lunch with us. After that, he goes to his job and returns back at 8 P. M to get dinner. Than he goes out to play cards with his friends, than he comes back to sleep at 12 A. M

Mohammad is my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 brother in blood. I was not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 well with him until my father This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 cancer in his liver and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :passed away
died
, then everything has Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).changed, and
changed and
 he became close to me.

He is a computer teacher. He You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
gets
 up at 7: 00 A. M to pick up his children at school. After that, he has breakfast in a restaurant which is bean cooked in Arabic way. Then he looks for passengers to pick up them to where they want to go. He works to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
get
 extra money This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the life became too expensive. He goes to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
get
 his children back at 2 P. M then he You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
gets
 lunch with us. After that, he goes to his job and Consider using "returns".returns
returns back
 at 8 P. M to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpullearnlandreceivewinmake
get
 dinner. Did you mean "Then"?Then
Than
 he goes out to play cards with his friends, Did you mean "then"?then
than
 he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 back to sleep at 12 A. Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphM.M!M?M:M,M;
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