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Muscular and mental strenght in sports

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Some believe that a player's muscular strength determines their performance in sports, while others believe that mental power is more essential for doing well on the field. Physical stamina, in my opinion, is more essential than mental agility. On the one hand, mental toughness is crucial when playing a sport. Players must be able to concentrate and maintain sight of their objective at all times. They must also be able to play without losing heart when the opposition outperforms them during the game. They will lose the game if they lose heart and get despondent. Muscle strength, on the other hand, is even more essential. Physical sport is not a mind game, and as a result, a player's cerebral strength will not help them achieve anything. Athletes that compete on the field must have enormous physical strength and stamina. In football, for example, a player should be able to play for 90 minutes or longer at a time. They must run, jump, attack, and protect, and the body is responsible for all of these tasks. They are unable to continue playing without a strong body. Of course, mental stability will aid them in remaining concentrated without becoming discouraged; nevertheless, attention alone will not be enough to win the game. To summarize, players require both physical and mental abilities to win a game; yet, physical strength is far more essential than mental ability in athletic events because success in such activities is totally dependent on a player's capacity to play relentlessly for the duration of the game.
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believe that a player's muscular
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strength
determines their performance in sports, while others believe that
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mental
power is more
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essential
for doing well on the field.
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Physical
stamina, in my opinion, is more
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essential
than
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mental
agility. On the one hand,
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mental
toughness is crucial when playing a sport. Players
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must
be able to concentrate and maintain sight of their objective at all times. They
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must
also
be able to play without losing heart when the opposition outperforms them during the game. They will lose the game if they lose heart and
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get
despondent. Muscle
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strength
,
on the other hand
, is even more
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essential
.
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Physical
sport is not a mind game, and
as a result
, a player's cerebral
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strength
will not
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help
them achieve anything. Athletes that compete on the field
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must
have enormous
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physical
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strength
and stamina. In football,
for example
, a player should be able to play for 90 minutes or longer at a time. They
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must
run, jump, attack, and protect, and the body is responsible for all of these tasks. They are unable to continue playing without a strong body.
Of course
,
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mental
stability will aid them in remaining concentrated without becoming discouraged;
nevertheless
, attention alone will not be
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enough
to win the game.
To summarize
, players require both
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physical
and
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mental
abilities to win a game;
yet
,
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physical
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strength
is far more
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essential
than
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mental
ability in athletic
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events
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because
success in such activities is
totally
dependent on a player's capacity to play
relentlessly
for the duration of the game.

IELTS essay Muscular and mental strenght in sports

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  American English
1 paragraphs
256 words
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