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Today is my first day after coming back to Gaziantep, it sounds like going back to home. As they say, home sweet home. Maybe I have got used to this situation, and I consider it as my hometown. However, we have bad news from Tuinis, the president has done a cokc against the government which means the end of the democrasy. What he has done is not explicit and he must sustain the consequneces. Therefore, no one knows how to rebuild the country and the whole arab presidents, prime ministers and kings are stupid and not able to govern a town even.
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Today
is my
first
day after coming back to Gaziantep, it sounds like going back to home. As they say, home sweet home. Maybe I have
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got
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used
to this situation, and I consider it as my hometown.
However
, we have
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bad
news from
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Tuinis
, the president has done a
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cokc
against the
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government
which means the
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end
of the
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democrasy
. What he has done is not
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explicit and
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sustain the
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consequneces
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, no one knows how to rebuild the country and the whole
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presidents, prime ministers and kings are stupid and not able to govern a town even.
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IELTS essay talk about your day and plans

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  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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