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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? a8y1o
Nowadays, we can see many companies are established every day, and offer their products more affectevly by many ways, such as: motion graphics advertisements. It is believed that companies provides easy ways to chatt with ourselves, like: Facebook, and smart transports, as: Tesla Cars and many other things. We will talk about how multinational companies are providing easy life for people, and how they are impositing our life by faked advertisements. Firstly, one of the great advantages of increasing multi national companies is providing many services for miilions of people in different prices, so it will be fitting for all people; however, their statement of wealthy. Furthermore, learning many types for electronics marketing to help these big companies, so there will be many big chances to be employed, and make a big income. For example, many restaurants announce many chances for unworkers people, who don't have any chance for a work. Secondly, one of the most negative things is tricking people to buy companies's products. Moreover, attracting people to factories's products to buy more more tainted food or damaged devices because of factories's tricked advertisements. Moreover, making lobbies to impose governments decisions, or using advertisements for political purposes. For instance, many big restaurants in some countries make lobbies to oblige people to buy from their products. In conclusion, phenomenon of increasing factories and companies has its positive and negative situation, but you can join the big challenge between companies's chances, and choose your opinion. Consequently, I am a big fan of let companies and factories rise more and more.
Nowadays, we can
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companies
are established
every day, and offer their products more
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affectevly
by
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many
ways, such as: motion graphics
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advertisements
. It
is believed
that
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companies
provides easy ways to
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chatt
with ourselves, like: Facebook, and smart transports, as: Tesla Cars and
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many
other things. We will talk about how multinational
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companies
are providing easy life for
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people
, and how they are
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impositing
our life by faked
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advertisements
.
Firstly
, one of the great advantages of increasing
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multi national
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companies
is providing
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many
services for
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miilions
of
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people
in
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different
prices,
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so
it will be fitting for all
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people
;
however
, their statement of wealthy.
Furthermore
, learning
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many
types for electronics marketing to
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help
these
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big
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companies
,
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so
there will be
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many
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big
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chances
to
be employed
, and
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make
a
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big
income.
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,
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many
restaurants announce
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many
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chances
for
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unworkers
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people
, who don't have any chance for a work.
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, one of the most
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negative
things is tricking
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people
to
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buy
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companies's
products.
Moreover
, attracting
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people
to
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factories's
products to
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buy
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more more
tainted food or damaged devices
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because
of
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factories's
tricked
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advertisements
.
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Moreover
, making lobbies to impose
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governments
decisions, or using
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advertisements
for political purposes.
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,
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many
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big
restaurants in
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some
countries
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make
lobbies to oblige
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people
to
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buy
from their products.

In conclusion
, phenomenon of increasing factories and
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companies
has its
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positive
and
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negative
situation,
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but
you can
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join
the
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big
challenge between
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companies's
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chances
, and choose your opinion.
Consequently
, I am a
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big
fan of
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let
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companies
and factories rise more and more.
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IELTS essay Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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