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Most people today prefer to socialize online rather than spending time with their friends in local community .Are advantages more than disadvantages.

In modern days, individuals are extremely active on social networking websites instead of time invest on their kin and kiths in society. Despite there are plethora of demerits as compared to merits. This essay will that cons of this approach suppress the advantages brought by it. Discussing the first point, the most intrinsic one is that communication skills. In modern epoch, not only i but also majority of folks give preffered to to the social media. For instance, a survey which was conducted by the scholars of the university of Columbia. Learners put the survey on 70 people's and they found that 66 human's which were more time invest on the social applications when there transmission skills are worse. Consequently, face failure in life is enormous reason.

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