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‘Telecommuting’-working from home and in contact with office via computers-is becoming common in many countries.How is society affected by the growth of telecommuting?Is it a positive or negative development?

Inspite of the substancial growth of technology and communication over the last 10 years, there is always a prevailing arguement if it is an advantage or disadvantage to the society. The intervention of telecommuting has however gained lot of positive reponses especially during the pandemic and it has become the new normal. Personally, I believe that telecommuting has a postive impact on the society which I shall explain by penning down the advantages and disadvantages. Now-a-days due to the easy affordability of data plans and networks, telecommuting has definitely become a hassle-free option to go to. One of the undeniable fact is that working from home was the only fuel that kept the businesses on track during the detrimental pandemic and lockdown situation. Connecting virtually, the employers were able to work from home safely. Not only does working from home has the advantage of flexibility of hours and a sophisticated environment, but also, it eventually reduces the need for transportation leading to lesser environmental impact. Though Telecommuting has a lot of positives in the list, there are also some downsides. The privacy of the business or the company has become a major concern, as they might have to share their network to be easily accesed by their empoloyees. The conundrum is that, there might be a higher chance of illicit access to data and files while spreading their WAN to a wider area. Analysing the pros and cons, my conclusion is that Telecommuting leans more towards the positive side and its scope might increase if the counter-advantages are addressed.
Inspite
of the
substancial
growth of technology and communication over the last 10 years, there is always a prevailing
arguement
if it is an advantage or disadvantage to the society. The intervention of telecommuting has
however
gained
lot of
positive
reponses
especially
during the pandemic and it has become the new normal.
Personally
, I believe that telecommuting has a
postive
impact on the society which I shall
explain
by penning down the advantages and disadvantages.

Now
-a-days due to the easy affordability of data plans and networks, telecommuting has definitely become a hassle-free option to go to. One of the undeniable fact is that working from home was the
only
fuel that
kept
the businesses on
track
during the detrimental pandemic and lockdown situation. Connecting
virtually
, the employers were able to work from home
safely
. Not
only
does working
from home has the advantage of flexibility of hours and a sophisticated environment,
but
also
, it
eventually
reduces
the need for transportation leading to lesser environmental impact.

Though Telecommuting has
a lot of
positives in the list, there are
also
some
downsides. The privacy of the business or the
company
has become a major concern, as they might
have to
share their network to be
easily
accesed
by their
empoloyees
. The conundrum is that, there might be a higher chance of illicit access to data and files while spreading their WAN to a wider area.

Analysing
the pros and cons, my conclusion is that Telecommuting leans more towards the
positive
side and its scope might increase if the counter-advantages
are addressed
.
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IELTS essay ‘Telecommuting’-working from home and in contact with office via computers-is becoming common in many countries. How is society affected by the growth of telecommuting? Is it a positive or negative development?

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