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in many countries paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

In this era of digitalization, we have become habitual of getting almost every job done through the internet or smart-phone applications, whether it is related to pay utility bills or school fee. Paying from the phone apps for regular groceries and shopping has become increasingly popular in most countries. Whether it has more advantages or disadvantages is debatable; however, I believe it has more advantages. There are many positives of paying online but to me, the most important is that it is time-saving. We are always running out of time due to our hectic schedules, these paying apps can save our precious time. For instance, if I have to pay my utility bills on an urgent basis, I can pay all the bills with a single click without the hassle of traveling to the bank; therefore, due to this reason, these paying applications are a time saver. Additionally, the use of these apps is way more convenient than the conventional way of paying in cash. Carrying paper money always comes with the stress of keeping it secure so that one does not deprived of it. To exemplify this, we don’t have to carry hard cash for online payments; consequently, no need to carry hefty amount before shopping, bill payment, and grocery payment. Due to the fact that these online paying applications are safe and convenient, these applications have ultimately made our lives easier and stress free. On the other hand, it has some drawbacks as well. The major con of online payments through these applications is the risk of fraud. In fact, one needs to enter his personal details for online paying methods, which ultimately increases the risk of scam for the owner. People need to be vigilant and attentive before providing their credentials. To conclude, it is undeniable fact that online payment methods have both merits and demerits; however, the security, convenience and time saving aspects of a phone application to pay for utilities outweigh the negatives of being scammed.
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applications
, whether it
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pay
utility
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bills
or school fee.
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Paying
from the phone apps for regular groceries and shopping has become
increasingly
popular in most countries. Whether it has more advantages or disadvantages is debatable;
however
, I believe it has more advantages.

There are
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many
positives of
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paying
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online
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but
to me, the most
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important
is that it is time-saving. We are always running out of
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time
due to our hectic schedules, these
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paying
apps can save our precious
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time
.
For instance
, if I
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have to
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pay
my utility
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bills
on an urgent basis, I can
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pay
all the
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bills
with a single click without the hassle of traveling to the bank;
therefore
, due to this reason, these
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paying
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applications
are a
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time
saver.

Additionally
, the
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use
of these apps is way more convenient than the conventional way of
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paying
in cash. Carrying paper money always
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comes
with the
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stress
of keeping it secure
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so
that one does not
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deprived
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have to
carry
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hard
cash for
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online
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payments
;
consequently
, no need to carry hefty amount
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before
shopping,
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bill
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payment
, and grocery
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payment
. Due to the fact that these
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online
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paying
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applications
are safe and convenient, these
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applications
have
ultimately
made our
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lives
easier and
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stress
free.

On the other hand
, it has
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some
drawbacks
as well
. The major con of
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online
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payments
through these
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applications
is the
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risk
of fraud. In fact, one needs to enter his personal
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details
for
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online
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paying
methods, which
ultimately
increases the
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risk
of scam for the owner.
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People
need to be vigilant and attentive
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before
providing their credentials.

To conclude
, it is undeniable fact that
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online
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payment
methods have both merits and demerits;
however
, the security, convenience and
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time
saving aspects of a phone
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application
to
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pay
for utilities outweigh the negatives of
being scammed
.
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IELTS essay in many countries paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

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  American English
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331 words
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