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Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. with this opinion? nJJE

People argue that we no longer remember the original meaning of festivals. A plethora of us treat it as opportunity to have fun. while I agree that enjoyment be the priority during the festivals time, I do not agree that we have forgotten what the festivals mean. On the one hand, the traditional and religious festivals have become interisting periods for enjoyment. In the UK, Christmas considered good example for festival season when the most of people deeply concerned with shopping, deliver presents, and decorating their homes. In addition to, having their conventional meals with their families. Numerous people look forward to Christmas as holiday duration, rather considering it an occousion to perform religious pray

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