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Most of the people prefer private trasporation

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It is irrefutable that people mostly prefer private vehicles for commuting. Reasons and possible solutions are discussed in the following paragraphs. There are many reasons to use private vehicles. Firstly, once own transportation offers immense of privacy. You can start or stop your vehicle where ever you want. Sencodly it offers safety. You can drive the vehicle safe and carefully. Finally, a private vehicle shows your standred of living. However there are some solutions to increase use of public transportation. Government need to give some reduction to people. for instance season tickets and monthly cards so on. So that people have more interest to utalize it. Moreover public trasporation
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people
mostly
prefer private
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vehicles
for commuting. Reasons and possible solutions
are discussed
in the following paragraphs.

There are
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reasons to
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use
private
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vehicles
.
Firstly
, once
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own
transportation offers immense of privacy. You can
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start
or
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your
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vehicle
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Sencodly
it offers safety. You can drive the
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safe and
carefully
.
Finally
, a private
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standred
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However
there are
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use
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utalize
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IELTS essay Most of the people prefer private trasporation

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
108 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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