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Most of our information comes from internet nowadays. Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect. Do you agree or disagree?

Most of our information comes from internet nowadays. Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect. 0Oe5
Internet is play big role in the human life. In the modern era internet provides a lot information about the study business and news all over the world etc. But a few people said that we get incorrect information on the internet. I agree with this statement because some time internet provide totally correct information. I will discuss it in detail in the upcoming paragraphs. To start with, internet provide correct information about the study and regarding the political and government jobs. When people search about the any information in any website they get more information. After they check information for the shewrety on the other sites. When they get same results and information they believe that this information is correct. For instance, nowadays government provide more information on the internet regarding the jobs. And people get information in the newspaper. Furthermore, if the information is correct on internet it can enjoy a last attraction to readers with an expectation to have more readers the author will be encourage to post correct and article which will in turn attract more and more visitors to the website. Otherwise when people feel that this information is incorrect then they will stop to visiting the blog. To concluded with, in my opinion internet provide correct information but some time they provide incorrect information. Before the take any action we should check information on the other site this information correct or incorrect. After some checking we believe that this information is correct.
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role in the human life. In the modern era internet
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provides
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information
about the study business and news all over the world etc.
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a few
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people
said that we
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get
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incorrect
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information
on the internet. I
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agree
with this statement
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because
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some
time internet
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provide
totally
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correct
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information
. I will discuss it in detail in the upcoming paragraphs.

To
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with, internet
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provide
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correct
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information
about the study and regarding the political and
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government
jobs.
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When
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people
search about the any
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information
in any website they
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get
more
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information
. After they
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check
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information
for the
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shewrety
on the other sites. When they
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get
same results and
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information
they believe that this
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information
is
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correct
.
For instance
, nowadays
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government
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provide
more
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information
on the internet regarding the jobs. And
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people
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get
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information
in the newspaper.
Furthermore
, if the
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information
is
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correct
on internet it can enjoy a last attraction to readers with an expectation to have more readers the author will be
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encourage
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to post
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correct
and article which will in turn attract more and more visitors to the website.
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Otherwise
when
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people
feel that this
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information
is
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incorrect
then they will
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stop
to visiting the blog.

To concluded with, in my opinion internet
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provide
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correct
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information
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but
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some
time they
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provide
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information
.
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Before
the take any action we should
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check
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information
on the other site this
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information
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correct
or
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incorrect
.
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After
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some
checking we believe that this
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information
is
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correct
.
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IELTS essay Most of our information comes from internet nowadays. Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
248 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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