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Most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, so museums are not needed anymore.

Most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, so museums are not needed anymore. 6MAK

Well, I don't agree with it. On one side it is right that we can found all Information about everything and with help modern technology we can do visual tour as if we are at there. But in the museums we can see it with all their charm. Museums also save it in good quality. So think museums are still relevant. However, efforts must be made for integrity of museums, art galleries and they should also refurbished by the country to boost the economy and beneficial for people. To conclude, a nation’s historical and cultural treasures abound in museums. Therefore, there must be maintained and it cannot be replaced by visiting the museum in person.

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agree
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found
 all Information about everything and with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 modern technology we can do visual tour as if we are at there. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museums
 we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 it with all their charm. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
Museums
also
 save it in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 quality. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
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think
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museums
 are still
 relevant. However
, efforts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be made
 for integrity of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museums
, art Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).galleries, and
galleries and
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refurbished
 by the country to boost the economy and beneficial for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

To conclude
, a nation’s historical and cultural treasures abound in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museums
. Therefore
, there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be maintained
 and it cannot be replaced
 by visiting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museum
 in person. 