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MOST ADMIRED PERSON IN INDIAN CRICKET

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Sachin Ramesh Tendulkar, God of cricket is the most admired person in my life. A person with an outstanding professional carrier record, hardworking, genuine, and goal orient person. I like him personally because he is such an outstanding personality also humane in nature. He has undergone so much hardship in his personal life but always focus on his goals. He never diverts his attitude from achieving his goals.
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Tendulkar
, God of cricket is the most admired person in my life. A person with an outstanding professional carrier record, hardworking, genuine, and goal orient person. I like him
personally
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humane in nature. He has undergone
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much hardship in his personal life
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always focus on his goals. He never diverts his attitude from achieving his goals.
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IELTS essay MOST ADMIRED PERSON IN INDIAN CRICKET

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