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More companies produce goods in the factories located in different countries other than the location of the head office. Advantages and disadvantages?

More companies produce goods in the factories located in different countries other than the location of the head office. Advantages and disadvantages? 56a6N
The import-export system around the world has always been a major business for many countries around the world. Every day more and more companies decide to create products overseas rather than their home country and then import them. This essay will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of this strategy and how it effects the economy of the country. Produceing goods in factories located overseas often brings many advantages from the business point of view. Firstly, a country like China for example have a much less labour costs compared to Australia. Provided that, produceing an items over there, will cut down the wages even if that item have to be shipped by boat. A recent study conducted by the Monash university in Melbourne revealed that businesses are able to cut down the costs of goods by at least 75% when investing in Beijin. Secondly, chinese workforce is second to none although the working conditions are often unacceptable. In other words, by having an immense amount of people working in factories often reduce the time in which the items are created. Consequently businesses can produce double of the amount of goods if produced overseas. On the other hand, there are also disadvantages when companies decide to produce goods in countries rather then their own one. First of all, shipping time and quality of the goods have always been the major problems that companies had to deal with. When it comes to shipping items, borders often have to quarantine goods ending up in major delays. They also get stored in a not appropiete ways and are often damaged and consequently costumer satisfaction is much less compared to local products. To conclude, companies are businesses and as a business identity they have to cut down costs as much as they can to improve their revenues. Provided that if i were a business owner i would prefer investing in my own countries to be able to give the possibility to my own people to work and raise families.
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around the world. Every day more and more
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companies
decide to create products overseas
rather
than their home
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country
and then import them. This essay will
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discuss about the
advantages and disadvantages of this strategy and how it effects the economy of the country.

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Produceing
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goods
in factories located overseas
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brings
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many
advantages from the
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business
point of view.
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, a
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country
like China
for example
have a much less
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labour
costs compared to Australia. Provided that,
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produceing
an
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items
over there, will
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cut
down the wages even if that
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item
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have to
be shipped
by boat. A recent study conducted by the
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Monash university
in Melbourne revealed that
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businesses
are able to
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cut
down the costs of
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goods
by at least 75% when investing in
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Beijin
.
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,
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chinese
workforce is second to none although the working conditions are
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unacceptable.
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people
working in factories
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the time in which the
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items
are created
.
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businesses
can produce double of the amount of
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goods
if produced overseas.

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disadvantages when
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companies
decide to produce
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in
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then
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, shipping time and quality of the
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have always been the major problems that
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companies
had to deal with. When it
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, borders
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ending up in major delays. They
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ways and are
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damaged and
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costumer satisfaction is much less compared to local products.

To conclude
,
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businesses
and as a
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business
identity they
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have to
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cut
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improve
their revenues. Provided that if
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i
were a
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business
owner
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i
would prefer investing in my
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countries
to be able to give the possibility to my
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people
to work and raise families.
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IELTS essay More companies produce goods in the factories located in different countries other than the location of the head office. Advantages and disadvantages?

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