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Many people believe children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. 9LwL0
There is a belief around us that children should start learning a different language at initial stage of schooling. According to me, learning a foreign language at such an early age would be a burden for children. Firstly, it is indicated that children have a marvellous ability to learn linguistics. People can learn a language easily when they are young. Many older people often say that they are too old to learn a foreign language. Children do not think much about life and the world, so they can remember new words quickly by watching videos, cartoons, or looking at the colourful books, pictures and real objects or joining some games. It is easy for children to imitate. They observer the other people and want to repeat accurately. Therefore, when learning sounds, they can hear and then repeat words and sentences effectively. Another reason for early language study is that children have some characteristics that are suitable to learn foreign languages. They are curious and eager to learn interesting new things. Besides, because of children, they are not shy and no fear of mistakes. They can repeat words many times without embarrassment, whereas that is impossible with adult. This helps children remember words easily. Thirdly, learning a foreign language from starting school, the young may dare to talk with foreigners and it's a very good chance to practice oral skills. This helps them have good reflection in communication. They feel confident when speaking in a foreign language. According to some studies, children who learn a second or foreign language before teenage years are more likely to achieve native-like pronunciation. In conclusion, many valuable books are written in some international languages such as English, students can get access to huge sources of learning. It is obvious that really necessary for children to learn a foreign language as soon as start school.
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at initial stage of schooling.
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at such an early age would be a burden for children.

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children
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ability to
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linguistics.
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easily
when they are young.
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older
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people
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say that they are too
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Children
do not
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think
much about life and the world,
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so
they can remember new words
quickly
by watching videos, cartoons, or looking at the
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colourful
books, pictures and real objects or joining
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games. It is easy for
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children
to imitate.
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They observer
the other
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people
and want to repeat
accurately
.
Therefore
, when
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learning
sounds, they can hear and then repeat words and sentences
effectively
.

Another reason for early
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language
study is that
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children
have
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some
characteristics that are suitable to
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learn
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languages
. They are curious and eager to
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learn
interesting new things.
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,
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of
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children
, they are not shy and no fear of mistakes. They can repeat words
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many
times without embarrassment, whereas
that is
impossible with adult. This
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helps
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children
remember words
easily
.

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,
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learning
a
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foreign
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language
from starting school, the young may dare to talk with foreigners and it's a
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very
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chance to practice oral
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. This
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reflection in communication. They feel confident when speaking in a
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. According to
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teenage years are more likely to achieve native-like pronunciation.

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valuable books
are written
in
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international
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languages
such as English, students can
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get
access to huge sources of
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. It is obvious that
really
necessary for
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children
to
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IELTS essay Many people believe children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
309 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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