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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem? T1

More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem? T1 JGRa
A lot of wild animals are disappearing and others being added to the list of rare animals. Two main causes such as abundance of hunters, ignoring animals and solutions including keeping hunt balance, taking care of animals will be discussed in this essay. Nowadays, wild animals are considered to be disappearing and endangering. In fact, I believe that a lot of hunters and neglecting animals are the most common causes of this problem because a lot of animals are being hunted in order to get meat, wool and others. For example, scientists found that 25% of animals are endangering per year. For these reasons above if people do not take care of animals and keep hunt balance, animals may come across strong perils.
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and others
being
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added
to the list of rare animals.

Two main causes such as abundance of hunters, ignoring
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animals
and solutions including keeping hunt balance, taking care of
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animals
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in this essay.

Nowadays, wild
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animals
are considered
to be disappearing and endangering. In fact, I believe that
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a lot of
hunters and neglecting
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animals
are the most common causes of this problem
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because
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a lot of
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animals
are
being hunted
in order to
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get
meat, wool
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and others
.
For example
, scientists found that 25% of
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animals
are endangering per year. For these reasons above if
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people
do not take care of
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animals
and
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keep
hunt balance,
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animals
may
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come
across strong perils.
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IELTS essay More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem? T1

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
123 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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