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More and more plastic is polluting cities the countryside and oceans. What problems are caused by plastic waste. what can be done to solve this problems.

More and more plastic is polluting cities the countryside and oceans. What problems are caused by plastic waste. what can be done to solve this problems. Jm1B
The side effect of plastic pollution are around us in our land, water, Air. Moreover, it is become usual to see sea birds, dead fish, whales, mammals have plastic on their stomach. This essay will elaborate using plastic brings what kinds of hazards to the environment and what can be taken to overcome this issue. Between 1. 26 million tons and 2. 65 million tons of plastics enter to the ocean from the river system every year. Hence, this derbies contributes to Massive Oceanic vortexes, A study found that, 300 million tons of Plastic produce each year. This is more important however, than find out solutions. Plastic bottles, Straw, synthetic fabric are an example of plastic pollution. Research found that, only in European Union, use 46 million tons of beverage bottles per year. Conversely, synthetic fabrics such as polyester and nylon contain micro fibers. Thus, when you wash your clothes this garments shed these tiny fibers which then can travel to local water. Research from university of California revealed that synthetic garments released 1174 milligrams of microfibers in the was. Hence, what can be the solution to this problems, we can not change this scenario overnight, There is provers says "nudge don't judge". Moreover, we need to educate our people how plastic harm our daily lives and environments. Furthermore, instead of using plastic bottles we need to look for re-cyclable staff. In addition, straw looks small in size although has greater impacts on pollution, rather than straw, wooden crockeries can be use. Lastly but mot least, we should use more likely cotton fabrics as opposite of synthetic fabrics. To recapitulate, plastic pollution has greater consequence since 1950. However, this all are human behave to our planet. Moreover, if we want next generation breath in healthy circumstance we need more likely change our dependency on plastic
The side effect of
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plastic
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pollution
are around us in our land, water, Air.
Moreover
, it
is become
usual to
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see
sea birds, dead fish, whales, mammals have
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plastic
on their stomach. This essay will elaborate using
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plastic
brings what kinds of hazards to the environment and what can
be taken
to overcome this issue.

Between 1. 26
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million
tons and 2. 65
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million
tons of
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plastics
enter to the ocean from the river system every year.
Hence
,
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this
derbies contributes to Massive Oceanic vortexes, A study found that, 300
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million
tons of
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Plastic
produce each year. This is more
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important
however
, than find out solutions.
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Plastic
bottles, Straw,
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synthetic
fabric are an example of
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plastic
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pollution
. Research found that,
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only
in European Union,
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use
46
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million
tons of beverage bottles per year.
Conversely
,
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synthetic
fabrics such as polyester and nylon contain micro fibers.
Thus
, when you wash your clothes this garments shed these tiny fibers which then can travel to local water. Research from
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university of California
revealed that
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synthetic
garments released 1174 milligrams of microfibers in the was.

Hence
, what can be the solution to
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this
problems, we can not
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change
this scenario overnight,
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says
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"
nudge don't judge
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.
Moreover
, we need to educate our
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people
how
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plastic
harm our daily
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lives
and environments.
Furthermore
,
instead
of using
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bottles we need to look for
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re-cyclable
staff.
In addition
, straw looks
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small in size
although has greater impacts on
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pollution
,
rather
than straw, wooden
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crockeries
can be
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use
.
Lastly
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mot least, we should
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use
more likely cotton fabrics as opposite of
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synthetic
fabrics.

To recapitulate,
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plastic
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pollution
has greater
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consequence since
1950.
However
,
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this all are
human behave to our planet.
Moreover
, if we want
next
generation breath in healthy circumstance we need more likely
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change
our dependency on
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plastic

IELTS essay More and more plastic is polluting cities the countryside and oceans. What problems are caused by plastic waste. what can be done to solve this problems.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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