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More and more people are moving in city and living to cuntryside

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In the modern era Individuals have migrated in city town rather than stayed in rural areas because of better education and life style. Despite of countryside's clean and neat nature we cannot deniy above statement. Let's discuss the Merits and demerits in upcoming paragraph. To commence with, the culture of down town are wearing by people due to become life better than countryside. youngester have moved in cities by parents for high skill studies which are taking steps beyond bright. future. In spite of, meet new people of knowledgeable and high experienced
In the modern era Individuals have migrated in city town
rather
than stayed in rural areas
because
of better education and life style.
Despite of
countryside's clean and neat nature we cannot
deniy
above statement.
Let
's discuss the Merits and demerits in upcoming paragraph. To commence with, the culture of down town are wearing by
people
due to become life better than countryside.
youngester
have
moved
in cities by parents for high
skill
studies which are taking steps beyond bright.
future
.
In spite of
,
meet
new
people
of knowledgeable and high
experienced
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IELTS essay More and more people are moving in city and living to cuntryside

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
91 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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