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Modern shopping malls are more popular among people than local shops what are the advantages and disadvantages buy product from supermarket

Modern shopping malls are more popular among people than local shops what are the advantages and disadvantages buy product from supermarket jNaM
The attraction of paper 2 words the supermarket is much because of modernization l. people like to buy or products from hypermarkets rather than local shops. Conveniency and better quality is a primary advantages behind this and disadvantage is for affordability. To begin with, the predominant advantages of buying products from super market that is conveniency and quality of product as well as security. Indeed, people can personal all the product under the one roof that is not possible in local shops. Moreover, CCTV cameras are available in each and every corner of the Store, resulting in alert people in any difficult situation as well as in modern Mall have emergency doors that can used in in the case of fire. Further, people can easily get all the product due to display in different apparts. Video most of the people like to purchase anything from malls because provide membership card for customers add send message on phone about the changes in the product price and they can get some rewards. On the other hand buying products from the big malls is not available for all the individuals because of high prices poor people cannot buy. Unfortunately, they cannot bargaining in malls, although, product all the price is out of range as compare with quality of it. apart from we cannot exchange again when the per dogs but it in the local data not try again and again. At the end, after all the discussion I would like to say that without any doubt Super Stores becoming more popular in the case of buying product as quality and safety but not for all.
The attraction of paper 2 words the supermarket is much
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because
of modernization l.
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people
like to
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buy
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products
from hypermarkets
rather
than local shops.
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Conveniency
and better
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quality
is a primary advantages behind this and disadvantage is for affordability.

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begin
with, the predominant advantages of buying
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products
from super market
that is
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conveniency
and
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quality
of
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product
as well
as security.
Indeed
,
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people
can personal all the
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product
under the one roof
that is
not possible in local shops.
Moreover
, CCTV cameras are available in each and every corner of the Store, resulting in alert
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people
in any difficult situation
as well
as in modern
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Mall
have emergency doors that can
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used
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in in
the case of fire.
Further
,
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people
can
easily
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get
all the
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product
due to display in
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different
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apparts
. Video most of the
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people
like to
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purchase
anything from
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malls
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because
provide membership card for customers
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add
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send
message on phone about the
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changes
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product
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price and
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buying
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products
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big
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malls
is not available for all the individuals
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because
of high prices poor
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people
cannot
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buy
. Unfortunately, they cannot
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bargaining
in
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malls
, although,
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product
all the price is out of range as compare with
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quality
of it. apart from we cannot exchange again when the per dogs
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but
it in the local data not try again and again. At the
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end
,
after all
the discussion I would like to say that without any doubt Super Stores becoming more popular in the case of buying
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product
as
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quality
and safety
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but
not for all.
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IELTS essay Modern shopping malls are more popular among people than local shops what are the advantages and disadvantages buy product from supermarket

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
272 words
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