Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

migrate dinosaur

migrate dinosaur GMoOx
The passage asserts that a type of dinosaurs named Edmontosaurus have migrated to the North Slope and provides three reasons of support. The professor, on the contrary, repudiates this point and rejects the mentioned reasons provided by the passage. First, the article states that Edmontosaurus had feed on plant. since in the winter they had migrated to the warmer zones to find food. The lecturer debunks this point by saying that in the summer Edmontosaurus were in the warm areas which there were a plenty of plant and vegetation, since in the winter they feed on the dead vegetation, so there was no need to migrate to other regions. Second, the discovered Edmontosaurus' s skeletons reveal that they had migrated in herd like other animal such as caribou and buffalo, according to the reading. The professor casts doubt o this view by explaining that migrating in her does not necessarily means that Edmontosaurus migrated to the other regions. She also states that there are other possible reasons for living herd, and one of them is to protect the herd from predators. She provided an example of one type of elk which live in herd, but never migrate. Third, the author of the passage claims that ability to move fast and physical power help Edmontosaurus to reach more suitable region. The lecture disavows this idea by reasoning that the juveniles were not able to move fast, since they were incapable physically and they often move slowly, if they move to North Slople they left behind and no longer survive in the cold region.
The passage asserts that a type of dinosaurs named
Possible spelling mistake found.
Edmontosaurus
have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
migrated
to the North Slope and provides three reasons of support. The professor,
on the contrary
, repudiates this point and rejects the mentioned reasons provided by the passage.

First
, the article states that
Possible spelling mistake found.
Edmontosaurus
had feed on plant.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
since
in the winter they had
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
migrated
to the warmer zones to find food. The lecturer debunks this point by saying that in the summer
Possible spelling mistake found.
Edmontosaurus
were in the warm areas which there were a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of plant and vegetation, since in the winter they feed on the dead vegetation,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
there was no need to migrate to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
regions.

Second, the discovered
Possible spelling mistake found.
Edmontosaurus
' s skeletons reveal that they had
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
migrated
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
herd
like
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
animal such as caribou and buffalo, according to the reading. The professor casts doubt o this view by explaining that migrating in her does not
necessarily
The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: "mean"
means
that
Possible spelling mistake found.
Edmontosaurus
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
migrated
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
regions. She
also
states that there are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
possible reasons for living
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
herd
, and one of them is to protect the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
herd
from predators. She provided an example of one type of elk which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
herd
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
never migrate.

Third, the author of the passage claims that ability to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
move
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
and physical power
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
Possible spelling mistake found.
Edmontosaurus
to reach more suitable region. The lecture disavows this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
by reasoning that the juveniles were not able to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
move
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
, since they were incapable
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
physically and
they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
move
slowly
, if they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
move
to North
Possible spelling mistake found.
Slople
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
behind and no longer survive in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
region.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay migrate dinosaur

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5.5band
    easier education of children by parents
    Controversy exists over whether parents are involved in their children's education than they were in the past. whereas, some may hold the opinion that parents these days share their times more with children to teach them, others adhere an opposite directtion. However, I would rather vote on the late...
  • 6band
    explore the north pole
    The passage asserts that there are three powerful argumnts which show the Robert Peary reached to the North pole. The professor states that mentioned reasons by the passage are not solid and they are unconvincing, and she rejects each arguments provided by the passage. First, the article claims tha...
  • 6band
    little ice age possible arguments
    The passage arises three possible argumenst about reasons of creating Little Ice Age. The professor, on the contrary, rejects each argument proposed by the passage and says that the passage' claim is out of date and provide three reasons of support. First, the author of the passage states that tran...
  • 6band
    decline in fish species
    The passage asserts that the zebra mussel, a kind of fish, is a serious threat to other species, since they will be dominat in the area and provides three reasons of support. The professor, on the contrary, debunks this point by rejecting each reason provided by the passage. First, the article clai...
  • 6band
    ethanol benefits integrated
    The passage rises three arguments againts using Ethanol as an alternative to gasoline. The lecturer disavows this point by saying that all mentioned reasons provided by passage are not convincing. First, the article claims that Ethanol no longer solve the environmnetal problems reasoning that it pr...
  • 5.5band
    Genetically modified trees integrated
    The passage asserts that genetically modified trees have some benefecials and provided three reasons of support. The lecture, on the contrary, repudiates this passage' claim and rejects each reason provided by the passage. First, the reading states that Genetically modified trees are resistent than...





Get more results for topic:
  • migrate dinosaur