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meet with fiend and visit hometown

meet with fiend and visit hometown Q82EX
i hope you will be fine and your family members are also fine. last year you had plan to visit northern areas, so i have decided to execute your plan. i will come tomorrow at 7: 00 am. you will pick me at airport and terminal number is 042. one important thing i will ask you that is laguage. i will come with huge laguage, you also bring with car which is carry a laguage. i'm planning to stay three days with you and then come back home. in my trip to visit your hometown and northern areas. taste your favourite local dishes just like desi foods and visit famous places just like fortress stadium and bahria town. they meet their friends and i'm glad to see you again.
i
hope you will be fine and your family members are
also
fine.
last
year you had plan to visit northern areas,
so
i
have decided to execute your plan.
i
will
come
tomorrow at 7: 00 am. you will pick me at airport and terminal number is 042.
one
important
thing
i
will ask you
that is
laguage
.
i
will
come
with huge
laguage
, you
also
bring with car which is carry a
laguage
.
i'm
planning to stay three days with you and then
come
back home.
in
my trip to visit your hometown and northern areas.
taste
your
favourite
local dishes
just
like
desi
foods and visit
famous
places
just
like fortress stadium and
bahria
town.
they
meet
their friends and
i'm
glad to
see
you again.
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IELTS essay meet with fiend and visit hometown

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
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5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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