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meet with fiend and visit hometown

meet with fiend and visit hometown Q82EX

i hope you will be fine and your family members are also fine. last year you had plan to visit northern areas, so i have decided to execute your plan. i will come tomorrow at 7: 00 am. you will pick me at airport and terminal number is 042. one important thing i will ask you that is laguage. i will come with huge laguage, you also bring with car which is carry a laguage. i'm planning to stay three days with you and then come back home. in my trip to visit your hometown and northern areas. taste your favourite local dishes just like desi foods and visit famous places just like fortress stadium and bahria town. they meet their friends and i'm glad to see you again.

Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 hope you will be fine and your family members are also
 fine. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLast
last
 year you had plan to visit northern areas, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have decided to execute your plan. Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 tomorrow at 7: 00 am. you will pick me at airport and terminal number is 042. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOne
one
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 thing Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will ask you that is
Possible spelling mistake found.language
laguage
. Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 with huge Possible spelling mistake found.language
laguage
, you also
 bring with car which is carry a Possible spelling mistake found.language
laguage
. Did you mean "I'm"?I'm
i'm
 planning to stay three days with you and then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back home. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 my trip to visit your hometown and northern areas. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTaste
taste
 your Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
 local dishes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like Possible spelling mistake found.deskDevideliCESIDEIDES
desi
 foods and visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 places This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like fortress stadium and Possible spelling mistake found.Bahia
bahria
 town. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 their friends and Did you mean "I'm"?I'm
i'm
 glad to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you again. 

IELTS essay meet with fiend and visit hometown

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

129 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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