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Describe an expensive activity that you enjoy doing occasionally.

Describe an expensive activity that you enjoy doing occasionally. XVDPq
Well, I am a type of a person who love to go out and always keen to do new things. although, i can say i am enthusiastic personality but i am not enough rich to spend money on costly activities regularly. So i love bungie jumping it is one of my fav activity which love to do whne i go out in hill area it is quiet expensive owing to its cost which is 2000 per person. I still remember that them when i went on voyage with friends to rishikesh there is discoved this activity captivating its was divine experience. I wish i will again get a chance to practice this again.
Well, I am a
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type of a
person who
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love
to go out and always keen to do new things.
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although
,
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i
can say
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i
am enthusiastic personality
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but
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i
am not
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enough
rich to spend money on costly activities
regularly
.
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So
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i
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love
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bungie
jumping it is one of my
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fav
activity which
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love
to do
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whne
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i
go out in hill area it is
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quiet
expensive owing to its cost which is 2000 per person. I
still
remember that them when
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i
went on voyage with friends to
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rishikesh
there is
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discoved
this activity captivating its was divine experience. I wish
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i
will again
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get
a chance to practice this again.
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IELTS essay Describe an expensive activity that you enjoy doing occasionally.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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