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Marketing and promotion is the key to successful business. To what extent do you agree?

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Some people claim that marketing and promotion plays a crucial role in improving the productivity of company. I agree with this view. However I also believe that marketing and promotion is necessary for business to flourish. Marketing and promotion are important to building work awareness. It is determine as every business aims to altract consumers to purchase their products. For instance, The Mac makeup shop has been promoting it surroundings- amiable makeup products to draw the public's first preference for brands. In my opinion these strategies can heighten business awareness and maintain people's liking for the work.
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people
claim that marketing and promotion plays a crucial role in improving the productivity of
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company
. I
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agree
with this view.
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However
I
also
believe that marketing and promotion is necessary for business to flourish.

Marketing and promotion are
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important
to building work awareness. It is
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as every business aims to
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altract
consumers to
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purchase
their products.
For instance
, The Mac makeup shop has been promoting it surroundings- amiable makeup products to draw the public's
first
preference for brands.

In my opinion these strategies can heighten business awareness and maintain
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's liking for the work.

IELTS essay Marketing and promotion is the key to successful business.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
97 words
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