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Most of the large business companies completely believe that marketing and promotion will bring people’s attention to their product. It’s quite obvious. Customers can see the company’s products frequently on television through product placement in the marketing campaign. They will be solicited due to they wondered whether those products are exclusive or remarkable. And when people gravitate towards their product that’s substantially synonymous with their acceptance of buying product.
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completely believe that marketing and promotion will bring
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people
’s attention to their
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product
. It’s quite obvious. Customers can
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see
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company
’s
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products
frequently
on television through
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product
placement in the marketing campaign. They will
be solicited
due to they wondered whether those
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products
are exclusive or remarkable. And when
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people
gravitate towards their
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product
that’s
substantially
synonymous with their acceptance of buying
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product
.
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IELTS essay marketing and promotion and as a result

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
69 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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