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Many students find it difficult to patmy attentiin at school .what are the reasons and hiw can be solved this?

Many students find it difficult to patmy attentiin at school. what are the reasons and hiw can be solved this? j9OOa
It is well said by minority of individuals that in present, learners face troubles to focus at the teritory place. So, many of their counterparts argue that lacknof concentration at school is a major cause of using technological gadgets as well as due to school curriculum. In this essay I will highlight not only the brief explanation of resons behind this escalating phenomenon with examples but also present few remedial solutions for it. To commence with, there are multifarious reasons which would be asssociated with that growing concern and one of the most predominant is due to the fact of tecnological innovations. In other words, in present scenario infants have a plethira of options to spend their time at computer, mobile and so on. Hence, due to the light of this fact they consume a number of hours at these things from day period to till late night which become a cause tiredness and stress. So, when children go at learning place they are unable to pay attention because of sleep deprivation. Thus, to mitigate that troublesome menance parents can play a vital role by encouraging social interaction in the behavior of juveniles, in order to make their self more fresh and calm because when they will reduce time consumption indoor as a result, they will get chance to meet with similars for entertain purposes. On the other hand, another cause linked with that perspective could be regarded to school curriculum. TI'll explicate it, nowadays progress in territory system can be easuly witnessed so, owing to that fact toddler's have ought to do study of all subjects almost continuously 7 to 8 hours merely by taking hakf an hour break between it which make their self so much tensed and due to lack of interest they cannot focus at school. For example, according to a statistics of 2018 which was done by educatery association revealed that almost 99% of students find it hard to concentrate at study due to the fact of kess interesting way of education. Therefore, to ameliorate that issue higher authority can takke gigantic step. It shoukd organize educational events time- to -time for developing interest in graduates because if, that step would have taken by it, eduacators will fell a sigh of relief. In conclusion, even though owing to the fact of technical innovations and not suffucient educatory techniques adolescwnts are not able to concentrate at school but if, law maker and parents of children would co-operate to their grow-ups by takingvsome of the ramifications by them that menance could be sort out.
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place.
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,
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many
of their counterparts argue that
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lacknof
concentration at
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school
is a major cause of using technological gadgets
as well
as
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due
to
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school
curriculum. In this essay I will highlight not
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only
the brief explanation of
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resons
behind this escalating phenomenon with examples
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but
also
present few remedial solutions for it.

To commence with, there are multifarious reasons which would be
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asssociated
with that growing concern and one of the most predominant is
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due
to the
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fact
of
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tecnological
innovations.
In other words
, in present scenario infants have a
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plethira
of options to spend their
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time
at computer, mobile and
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so
on.
Hence
,
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due
to the light of this
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fact
they consume a number of hours at these things from day period to till late night which become a cause tiredness and
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stress
.
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So, when
children go at learning place they are unable to pay attention
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because
of sleep deprivation.
Thus
, to mitigate that troublesome
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menance
parents can play a vital role by encouraging social interaction in the behavior of juveniles, in order to
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make
their self more fresh and calm
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because
when they will
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reduce
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time
consumption indoor
as a result
, they will
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get
chance to
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meet
with
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similars
for entertain purposes.

On the other hand
, another cause linked with that perspective could
be regarded
to
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school
curriculum. TI'll explicate it, nowadays progress in territory system can be
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easuly
witnessed
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so
, owing to that
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fact
toddler's
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have ought to
do study of all subjects almost
continuously
7 to 8 hours
merely
by taking
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hakf
an hour break between it which
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make
their self
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so
much tensed and
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due
to lack of interest they cannot focus at
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school
.
For example
, according to a statistics of 2018 which
was done
by
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educatery
association revealed that almost 99% of students find it
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hard
to concentrate at study
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due
to the
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fact
of
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kess
interesting way of education.
Therefore
, to ameliorate that issue higher authority can
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takke
gigantic step. It
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shoukd
organize educational
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events
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time-
to
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-time
for developing interest in graduates
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because
if, that step
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by it,
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eduacators
will
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fell
a sigh of relief.

In conclusion
,
even though
owing to the
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fact
of technical innovations and not
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suffucient
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educatory
techniques
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adolescwnts
are not able to concentrate at
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school
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but
if, law maker and parents of children would co-operate to their grow-ups by
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takingvsome
of the ramifications by them that
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menance
could be sort out.
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IELTS essay Many students find it difficult to patmy attentiin at school. what are the reasons and hiw can be solved this?

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4 paragraphs
427 words
6.0
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