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MANY PEOPLE TODAY USE THEIR PHONES FOR SENDING TEXTS MORE THAN TALKING. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? ARE THERE MORE ADVANTAGES THAN DISADVANTAGES.

MANY PEOPLE TODAY USE THEIR PHONES FOR SENDING TEXTS MORE THAN TALKING. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? ARE THERE MORE ADVANTAGES THAN DISADVANTAGES. 56awn
The invention of telephones through the means of modern technology advancement has influenced communication to a great length. For this, many are given to communicating to others by sending electronic short messages rather than verbal communications, with the use of their mobile phones. Those that practice this, have their cogent reasons. Will further elaborate on the cons and pros of this development. To begin with, text messages, when well composed, conveys the exact thought of the sender thereby leaving no room for misunderstanding. Hence, both parties engaged in the communication chain are on same page of the information passed across. Also, written messages are usually stored in the mobile phones of both the person sending as well as the one receiving it. This enables one to make references to messages sent previously. This is in contrast to talking, which sometimes fail to pass the exact message intended and cannot be recalled, except when recorded. On the one hand, many have argued that texting has greatly minimized the interpersonal relationships especially in the home fronts, whereby siblings are carried away with frequent exchange of information through electronic short messages rather than talking with one another, even whilst in same environment. On the other hand, some people believe that relating with other people through text messages is a time-saving approach. This stems from the fact that messages are easily conveyed and feedbacks received, within a very short space of time. This takes away the luxury of waiting for as long as it takes to pass on a message, especially when trying to engage people with tight schedules. It is also a convenient means of communicating. This has been proven effective in averting dangers. An example is historic event of 2001 in Bangkok, whereby a female gubernatorial aspirant, escaped near death situation because of a text she receiving fore warning her of the in coming danger. To conclude, people have found it more useful to send texts rather than speaking with other people, because of the compelling reasons that it is time saving and also convenient. This however, has it’s adverse effect mostly amongst family members. Nevertheless, written messages are efficient and timely.
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of their mobile phones. Those that practice this, have their cogent reasons. Will
further
elaborate on the cons and pros of this development.

To
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begin
with,
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text
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messages
, when well composed, conveys the exact
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thought
of the sender thereby leaving no room for misunderstanding.
Hence
, both parties engaged in the communication chain are on same page of the information passed across.
Also
, written
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messages
are
usually
stored in the mobile phones of both the person sending
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as well as
the one receiving it. This enables one to
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make
references to
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messages
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sent
previously. This is
in contrast
to talking, which
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sometimes
fail to pass the exact
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message
intended and cannot
be recalled
, except when recorded.

On the one hand,
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many
have argued that texting has
greatly
minimized the interpersonal relationships
especially
in the home fronts, whereby siblings
are carried
away with frequent exchange of information through electronic short
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messages
rather
than talking with one another, even whilst in same environment.

On the
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other
hand,
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people
believe that relating with
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people
through
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text
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is a time-saving approach. This stems from the fact that
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messages
are
easily
conveyed and feedbacks received, within a
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very
short space of time. This takes away the luxury of waiting for as long as it takes to pass on a
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message
,
especially
when trying to engage
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people
with tight schedules. It is
also
a convenient means of communicating. This has
been proven
effective in averting
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dangers
. An example is historic
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event
of 2001 in Bangkok, whereby a female gubernatorial aspirant, escaped near death situation
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because
of a
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text
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she receiving
fore warning her of the in coming
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danger
.

To conclude
,
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people
have found it more useful to
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send
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texts
rather
than speaking with
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other
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people
,
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because
of the compelling reasons that it is time saving and
also
convenient. This
however
, has
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it’s adverse effect
mostly
amongst family members.
Nevertheless
, written
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messages
are efficient and timely.
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IELTS essay MANY PEOPLE TODAY USE THEIR PHONES FOR SENDING TEXTS MORE THAN TALKING. WHAT ARE THE REASONS FOR THIS? ARE THERE MORE ADVANTAGES THAN DISADVANTAGES.

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