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Many people think that to become a successful specialist it's better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. To what extent do you agree with this view? Support your opinion with relevant examples.

Many people think that to become a successful specialist it's better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. Support your opinion with relevant examples. AAQn

Ideology and its implementation has been changing from generation to generations. In the early period most people thought that by choosing the career option early, they will become successful specialist and they never change. I completely contradict the given statement. In the present scenario being successful specialist or person will not depend on which time the career has been chosen, it depends on the passion and interest of one individual. For instance, as most of them known that owner of the famous KFC had become famous at age of 60's. Meanwhile In some cases like doctors at some extent the age matters, because if we persue in the field of medicine, it takes for years to become specialist. Nevertheless it is not been applicable to the all fields of education. Finally, choosing the career depends on the one perspective, their interest in their relevant field.

Ideology and its implementation has been changing from generation to generations. In the early period most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 that by choosing the career option early, they will become successful Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).specialist, and
specialist and
 they never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
. I completely contradict the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 statement. In the present scenario being successful specialist or person will not depend on which time the career has been chosen
, it depends on the passion and interest of one individual. For instance
, as most of them known that owner of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 KFC had become This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 at age of Apostrophes aren't needed for decades: "60s".60s
60's
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Meanwhile,
Meanwhile
 In This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 cases like doctors at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extent the age matters, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 if we Possible spelling mistake found.pursueperuseper sue
persue
 in the field of medicine, it takes for years to become specialist. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Nevertheless,
Nevertheless
 it is not been applicable to the all fields of education. Finally
, choosing the career depends on the one perspective, their interest in their relevant field. 