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Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. own9
Many individuals say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. In this case we will have look at what kind of company and in what field are they working in. It is true that a company who work in the mining industry may have a negative impact to it, such as Glencore PLC that based in Switzerland produces metal, mineral, energy and agricultural commodities that can led a decrease of natural resources on earth
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individuals say that globalization and the growing number of multinational
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companies
have a
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negative
effect on the environment.
In this case
we will have look at what kind of
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company
and in what field are they working in. It is true that a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
who work in the mining industry may have a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impact to it, such as
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Glencore
PLC that based in Switzerland produces metal, mineral, energy and agricultural commodities that can led a decrease of natural resources on
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earth

IELTS essay Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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