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Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is it positive or negative?

Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is it positive or negative? 3KKl
In today’s consumerism society, managing our monthly income is sometimes being neglected by many. Some people overlook the importance of having a culture of saving, let alone compounding. In my view, the current trend is both a negative and positive development. This essay will examine the causes of the present human behavior about money. Consumerism is one of the reason why many people end-up buying things excessive to their needs. Individual spending habits are increasing year-on-year, people tend to spend their income the minute they receive the money without considering the consequences that lies ahead. Citizens especially in developed world are pressured to keep up with peers, taking social- status for instance, if a neighbor or a friend buy an expensive car then someone are pressured to purchase the same or even higher in terms of value. Everyone overspends a little and splurges on occasion, but “Keeping up with the Joneses” can lead to financial ruin. Increased in spending, however, should not only focus on the negative side of the story. There are also valid reasons for the increased in spending that lead people to have little or no savings at all. For example, taxation increases and social services contribution. While it would be difficult for someone to enjoys paying taxes, some people recognise the positive impact to the society. In theory, higher taxes lead to more comprehensive social services and better infrastructures. In conclusion, expenses go up a lot easier than go down and it is very difficult for some people to stop spending but overspending on wants provide short-term gratification with long-term prices to pay. For me, there is a danger of not saving money even for a small amount at a time.
In
today
’s consumerism society, managing our monthly income is
sometimes
being neglected
by
many
.
Some
people
overlook the importance of having a culture of saving,
let
alone compounding. In my view, the
current
trend is both a
negative
and
positive
development. This essay will examine the causes of the present human behavior about money.

Consumerism is one of the reason why
many
people
end
-up buying things excessive to their needs. Individual
spending
habits are increasing year-on-year,
people
tend to spend their income the minute they receive the money without considering the consequences that lies ahead. Citizens
especially
in developed world
are pressured
to
keep
up with peers, taking social- status
for instance
, if a neighbor or a friend
buy
an expensive car then someone
are
pressured to
purchase
the same or even higher in terms of value. Everyone overspends a
little
and splurges on occasion,
but
“Keeping up with the
Joneses
” can lead to financial ruin.

Increased in
spending
,
however
, should not
only
focus on the
negative
side of the story. There are
also
valid reasons for the increased in
spending
that lead
people
to have
little
or no savings at all.
For example
, taxation increases and social services contribution. While it would be difficult for someone to enjoys paying taxes,
some
people
recognise
the
positive
impact to the society. In theory, higher taxes lead to more comprehensive social services and better infrastructures.

In conclusion
, expenses go up a lot easier than go down and it is
very
difficult for
some
people
to
stop
spending
but
overspending on
wants provide
short-term gratification with long-term prices to pay. For me, there is a
danger
of not saving money even for a
small
amount at a time.
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IELTS essay Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is it positive or negative?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
6.0
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