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Many people love to change their jobs frequently while others choose to stay in one job for a long time.

Many people love to change their jobs frequently while others choose to stay in one job for a long time. AgXRL
These days, numerous people are keen on changing their occupations, and on the contrary other people just want to do one job for a long time. From my point of view, have a few of advantage and disservice to clarify for this subject Firstly, several of pros to justify that many people permanent to be fond of changing their jobs. Transform occupations assist people have new experience with new work environment, it is exciting create better space. Secondly, it helps human has more opportunity to work, diversity profession to the best choice suitable for themselves. Thirdly, modify jobs also has difference salary to respond demand of individuals. In other words, if people work and receive high salary then they will have better take care for life, families … In contrast, several of cons leads to a large of number human move them jobs is adverse. To begin with, they cannot control the work environment and encountered many obstacles. Also, unstable salary it brings bad effect for life. To illustrate, with individuals didn’t have work stable and follow that will not have high salary and attend to life. It cans unemployment and impact on career in the future In summary, I would concede that many people love to change their jobs frequently while others choose to stay in one job for a long time does come with several adverse effects. Despite that fact, benefits created by it far outweigh the drawbacks. I am convinced that a number of people desire changing their jobs frequently
These days, numerous
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are keen on changing their occupations, and
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other
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for a long time. From my point of view, have a few of advantage and disservice to clarify for this subject

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, several of pros to justify that
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permanent to be fond of changing their
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. Transform occupations assist
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people
have new experience with new
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work
environment, it is exciting create better space.
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, it
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helps
human has more opportunity to
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, diversity profession to the best choice suitable for themselves.
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, modify
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jobs
also
has difference
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salary
to respond demand of individuals.
In other words
, if
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people
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and receive high
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salary
then they will have better take care for life, families …

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, several of cons leads to a large of number human
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them
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jobs
is adverse. To
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with, they cannot control the
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work
environment and encountered
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obstacles.
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, unstable
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it brings
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effect for life. To illustrate, with individuals didn’t have
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stable and follow that will not have high
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salary
and attend to life. It cans unemployment and impact on career in the
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future


In summary, I would concede that
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while others choose to stay in one
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for a long time does
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with several adverse effects. Despite that fact, benefits created by it far outweigh the drawbacks. I
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desire changing their
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frequently
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IELTS essay Many people love to change their jobs frequently while others choose to stay in one job for a long time.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
252 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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