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many people judge success solely by money and material possessions

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Some people believe that, if a person seem to be relatively wealthy, perhaps owning an expensive car, living a nice house and generally enjoying a high standard of living, this person is successful. This may indeed be true, there are certainly numerous other ways, in my view in which success can be achieved or measured. First of all, level of education is the best way for measured success. If passing exams on completing a course can be successful activities. If A level, a diploma or a degree are attainted then this is recognized as a successful achievements, yet qualifications, such as these not necessary lead to riches. Another type of success can be achieved in work situations, simply by doing one’s own particular job effectively. And also this activities indicate which is rate of success. Furthermore, success can be achieved in domestic life such as raising and supporting a family. And also a personal level it might be simply mean putting up shelves for the first time or winning a local sporting competition. In conclusion, there is no doubt that in today’s society people often regard success purely terms of wealth. In my opinion, it all depends on the individual of the personal goals.
Some
people
believe that, if a person seem to be
relatively
wealthy, perhaps owning an expensive car, living a nice
house
and
generally
enjoying a high standard of living, this person is successful. This may
indeed
be true, there are
certainly
numerous other ways, in my view in which
success
can
be achieved
or measured.

First of all
, level of education is the best way for measured
success
.
If
passing exams on completing a course can be successful activities. If A level, a diploma or a degree are
attainted
then this
is recognized
as a successful
achievements
,
yet
qualifications, such as these not necessary lead to riches.

Another type of
success
can
be achieved
in work situations,
simply
by doing one’s
own
particular job
effectively
. And
also
this
activities indicate which is rate of success.

Furthermore
,
success
can
be achieved
in domestic life such as raising and supporting a family. And
also
a personal level it might be
simply
mean putting up shelves for the
first
time or winning a local sporting competition.

In conclusion
, there is no doubt that in
today
’s society
people
often
regard
success
purely
terms of wealth. In my opinion, it all depends on the individual of the personal goals.
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IELTS essay many people judge success solely by money and material possessions

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