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Many people choose to learn practical subjects therefore theoretical subjects will be no longer be taught in universities.

Many people choose to learn practical subjects therefore theoretical subjects will be no longer be taught in universities. awQVX
In these days many people prefer to learn practical subjects to theoretical branch of sciences which as a result will be not taught in universities. I think that this view will be more dangerous than numerous disasters in the future. Firstly, all practical subjects depends on theoretical and we easily observe importance of undeniable subjects. For example, although most people use electricity, they believe that this amazing invention is founded by engineers, especially Nicola Tesla. In fact that if Michael Faraday who is physics professor does not invent electricity, we are unaware about essential progress. Secondly, both of few mathematicians and mathematics help other sciences, especially physics, computer sciences and biology. Cryptography play important role in security of datas and computer scientists use of this indispensable field of mathematics. For example, Alan Turing who is mathematician highly affect the development of computer sciences. Additionally, this disturbing statement may be happened, in my opinion we try to pretend this statement. Because if we are not able to improve core subjects, this world will be hardest life for us all the time. Magnificent natural resources are gradually decreasing, we know that how we recycle these, so it will not be necessary problem all over the world. Also we can learn this unforgettable ability owing to theoretical sciences, then we easily solve this unlucky problem by practical subjects and as the result each of them helps each other. In the conclusion, we should try to merge this unbelievable chances and I strongly believe that both of them facilitate our life. Frankly, we cannot think about future world without theoretical and practical subjects.
In these days
many
people
prefer to learn
practical
subjects
to
theoretical
branch of
sciences
which
as a result
will be not taught in universities. I
think
that this view will be more
dangerous
than numerous disasters in the future.

Firstly
, all
practical
subjects
depends on
theoretical and
we
easily
observe importance of undeniable
subjects
.
For example
, although most
people
use
electricity, they believe that this amazing invention
is founded
by engineers,
especially
Nicola Tesla. In fact that if Michael Faraday who is physics professor does not invent electricity, we are unaware about essential progress.
Secondly
, both of few mathematicians and mathematics
help
other
sciences
,
especially
physics, computer
sciences
and biology. Cryptography play
important
role in security of
datas
and computer scientists
use
of this indispensable field of mathematics.
For example
, Alan Turing who is mathematician
highly
affect the development of computer sciences.

Additionally
, this disturbing statement may
be happened
, in my opinion we try to pretend this statement.
Because
if we are not able to
improve
core
subjects
, this world will be
hardest
life for us all the time. Magnificent natural resources are
gradually
decreasing, we know that how we recycle these,
so
it will not be necessary problem all over the world.
Also
we can learn this unforgettable ability owing to
theoretical
sciences
, then we
easily
solve this unlucky problem by
practical
subjects
and as the result each of them
helps
each other.

In the conclusion, we should try to merge this unbelievable chances and I
strongly
believe that both of them facilitate our life.
Frankly
, we cannot
think
about future world without
theoretical
and
practical
subjects
.
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IELTS essay Many people choose to learn practical subjects therefore theoretical subjects will be no longer be taught in universities.

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