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a problem; a thing or situation that causes problems the difficulties of English syntax

a problem; a thing or situation that causes problems the difficulties of English syntax ljXdJ

Several people consider that the minimum age of matrimony should be 21. From my perspective, I agree with the viewpoint. There are a number of reasons why marriage earlier 21 is able to bring numerous disadvantages. The most obvious evidence is that teenagers under 21 are pursuing education in schools, as a result, it may exert adverse effects on their studies and their career later, if the teenagers make a family. Furthermore, the lack of a budget of the youngsters under 21 may have an impact on their lives, since they are likely to have yet to get a job in the ages. For example, a young person 17 years old does not have enough knowledge and experience to choose a job for him or her, so it can be difficult for him or her to earn money in order to rear a family. Personally, I believe that there are several reasons why 21 years old is the suitable age for marriage. First, young people in the age group may gain a wealth of knowledge about caring for babies, and the married couples will be responsible and understand each other. This is because they know their obligation towards themselves and their families. Hence, the percentage of ending in divorce will be decreased. Second, at the age of 21 and over, people are able to land a job. For instance, students 20 years old can graduate at a college after studying two years, so they can get a degree and are capable of finding a job. Therefore, they can have money to raise their families. In conclusion, I think that youngsters aged 20 and below have several problems when they go to a marriage, 21 or over is the relevant age for teenagers doing.

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people
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age
 of matrimony should be 21. From my perspective, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the viewpoint.

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teenagers
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teenagers
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make
 a family. Furthermore
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lives
, since they are likely to have yet
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get
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job
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ages
. For example
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old
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enough
 knowledge and experience to choose a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 for him or her, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it can be difficult for him or her to earn money in order to rear a family.

Personally
, I believe that there are several reasons why 21 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 is the suitable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 for marriage. First
, young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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age
 group may gain a wealth of knowledge about caring for babies, and the married couples will be responsible and understand each other. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they know their obligation towards themselves and their families. Hence
, the percentage of ending in divorce will be decreased
. Second, at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 of 21 and over, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are able to land a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. For instance
, students 20 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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graduate
 at a college after studying two years, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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get
 a degree and are capable of finding a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. Therefore
, they can have money to raise their families.

In conclusion
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that youngsters aged 20 and below have several problems when they go to a marriage, 21 or over is the relevant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 doing. 