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Many people believes that children are given too much

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Many people believes that children are given too much free time. So they feels that, the Hime should be used to do more educational related works. In this essay I intend to evaluate wether their opinion is Correct or notTo begin with, I don't really think that our children are provided with much free time to do leisure activities. For instance, Children Spend most of their time in schools dealing with educational activities. Some children are forced to attend special classes, the Cus only Special classes cyter school, the helps to build the mental here to studen The will never help a child to develop their entra Carr las actiuftior love out sports and so on. We have to provide thers need time to do their leisure net otheute it will negatively affect their mont!
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IELTS essay Many people believes that children are given too much

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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