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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. RQak
Unlike ester years, it is clear evident that, majority of the people consider that social media platforms, namely, Face book and others produce extreme devastating effect on each person as well as community. From my perspective, I completely agree with this statement. This essay outlines the plausible reasons along with examples in the succeeding paragraphs. On the one hand, social media is the biggest culprit of negative impressions on society which has been widely abundance. Indeed, that it has plethora of persuasive reasons. Firstly, the most remarkable reason for social media is danger for public is distracting studies. Whenever, students spend long hours for chatting with friends threw social networking sites along with streaming videos on various websites they would lose their precious time. Consequently, students lack of educations which is very imperative for bright future. At this juncture, citing an example is most relevant to substantiate the reasons is that, in recent survey reported that 80 percent of secondary school students got extreme low percentages in particular subject due to the fact of addicting to the various internet sites such as Facebook, Instagrame and Tiktok. Therefore, plenty of people supporting this view. In the same vein, another key reason for social networking cause’s hazard to community is reducing social skills. Since, social media applications and websites arrived in our life, everyone became like robots. Hence, no-one is showing interest to interact with others directly due to the fact of they feel virtual meetings more convenient and also time would be savior instead of going out. At the moment, exemplifying is more appropriate to justify the point stated above is that, I watched a documentary recently with the name of “ Is this life” which coveys meticulously myriad of people completely decreased to interface face to face to their friends and also relatives due to they are considering social media platforms are far better than direct meetings. Thereby, plethora of people want to take measurements for reduce the habit of utilizing these platforms. To conclude, all above mentioned reasons for social networking platforms will provide harmful impression on community proved to be an indisputable testimony by the sheer number of studies. Therefore, persuaded by all the points discussed hitherto, what I would like mention reiterate vehemently is that social media sites not only devastate education of students but also it reduce the social skills with their dear ones.
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platforms,
namely
, Face book
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and others
produce extreme devastating effect on each person
as well
as community. From my perspective, I completely
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agree
with this statement. This essay outlines the plausible
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reasons
along with examples in the succeeding paragraphs.

On the one hand,
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social
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media
is the biggest culprit of
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negative
impressions on society which has been
widely
abundance.
Indeed
, that it has plethora of persuasive
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reasons
.
Firstly
, the most remarkable
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reason
for
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social
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media
is
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danger
for public is distracting studies. Whenever,
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students
spend long hours for chatting with friends threw
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social
networking sites along with streaming videos on various websites they would lose their precious time.
Consequently
,
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students
lack of educations which is
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very
imperative for bright future. At this juncture, citing an example is most relevant to substantiate the
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reasons
is that, in recent survey reported that 80 percent of secondary school
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students
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got
extreme low percentages
in particular
subject due to the fact of addicting to the various internet sites such as Facebook,
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Instagrame
and
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Tiktok
.
Therefore
,
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of
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people
supporting this view.

In the same vein, another key
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reason
for
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social
networking cause’s hazard to community is reducing
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social
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skills
. Since,
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social
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media
applications and websites arrived in our life, everyone became like robots.
Hence
, no-one is showing interest to interact with others
directly
due to the fact of they feel virtual meetings more convenient and
also
time would be savior
instead
of going out. At the moment, exemplifying is more appropriate to justify the point stated above is that, I
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watched
a documentary recently with the name of
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“
Is this life” which coveys
meticulously
myriad of
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people
completely decreased to interface
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face to face to
their friends and
also
relatives due to they are considering
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social
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media
platforms are far better than direct meetings. Thereby, plethora of
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people
want to take measurements for
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reduce
the habit of utilizing these platforms.

To conclude
, all above mentioned
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reasons
for
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social
networking platforms will provide harmful impression on community proved to be an indisputable testimony by the sheer number of studies.
Therefore
, persuaded by all the points discussed hitherto, what I would like mention reiterate
vehemently
is that
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social
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media
sites not
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only
devastate education of
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students
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but
also
it
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reduce
the
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social
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skills
with their dear ones.

IELTS essay Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.

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