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Many people believe that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.To what extent do u agree.

Many people believe that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. jaKN
Social network sites like facebook, instagram and twitter made our life easier. We can connect with anyone accross the globe. It has many advantages. We can check status of our friends and family. We can share our achievements with the world. Teenagers are misusing the social networking sites. They play games on facebook. They waste their time on social media without studying. It is a negative impact for children. Social media has many advantages for individuals. We can know what is happening around the globe. Most important matters are shared on twitter. We can follow celebrities and politicians on twitter. Everything is up to date on social media. We can chat with our friends. We can share some videos or photos which we like. We can write a blog and share the link on social media for followers. We can read latest news updates on twitter.
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network sites like
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facebook
,
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instagram
and twitter made our life easier. We can connect with anyone
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accross
the globe. It has
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many
advantages. We can
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check
status of our friends and family. We can share our achievements with the world.

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Teenagers
are misusing the
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social
networking sites. They play games on
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facebook
. They waste their time on
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social
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media
without studying. It is a
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negative
impact for children.

Social
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media
has
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many
advantages for individuals. We can know what is happening around the globe. Most
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important
matters
are shared
on twitter. We can follow celebrities and politicians on twitter. Everything is up to date on
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social
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media
. We can chat with our friends. We can share
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some
videos or photos which we like.
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We
can write a blog and share the link on
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social
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media
for followers.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
We
can read
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latest
news updates on twitter.

IELTS essay Many people believe that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.

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