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Many people beleive that we should protect all wild animals while other believe we should just protect some of them. discuss bith views and give your opinion.

Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per distinct mindsets of different people. Therefore, it has become a debateable issue whether government has to take the responisibility to preserve entire wildlife or should needs to focuse on endager species only. This essay will not only discuss both perceptions but my point of view will be elaborated in the conclusion. To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour. Firstly, animals adds diversity in nature. In simple words, wildlife considered to be a essential part of the food chain and therefore, all wild animals need to be protected. For example, there are many rare specious such as lion feeds on other animals and those animals eat small insects, so if we want to save lions it is important to save their food as well. Moving toward the second view, it is undeniable that a number of species are on the edge of endeger and even some has been already extint. If the remaining are lost once, future generation will never see them. Therefore protectiion of these is endager species is vital. For an instance, Dianosores after their extintion we are only able to see them in movie, although goverments are providing numerous funding to reserch, however it is hard to get them back now. To sum up, according to my perspective, governments have to sponsor more funds to protect countable animals. Nevetheless, wild species are important for diversity. Governments should have to understand that when to prorities which life first.
Without any doubt, society
is divided
into two groups as per distinct mindsets of
different
people
.
Therefore
, it has become a
debateable
issue whether
government
has to
take the
responisibility
to preserve entire wildlife or should
needs
to
focuse on
endager
species
only
. This essay will not
only
discuss both perceptions
but
my point of view will
be elaborated
in the conclusion.

To commence with the
first
notion, there are myriad things to
be shared
in its
favour
.
Firstly
,
animals
adds
diversity in nature. In simple words, wildlife considered to be
a
essential part of the food chain and
therefore
, all wild
animals
need to
be protected
.
For example
, there are
many
rare specious such as lion feeds on other
animals
and those
animals
eat
small
insects,
so
if we want to save lions it is
important
to save their food
as well
.

Moving toward the second view, it is undeniable that a number of species are on the edge of
endeger
and even
some
has been already
extint
. If the remaining
are lost
once, future generation will never
see
them.
Therefore
protectiion
of these is
endager
species is vital. For an instance,
Dianosores
after their
extintion
we are
only
able to
see
them in movie, although
goverments
are providing numerous funding to
reserch
,
however
it is
hard
to
get
them back
now
.

To sum up, according to my perspective,
governments
have to
sponsor more funds to protect countable
animals
.
Nevetheless
, wild species are
important
for diversity.
Governments
should
have to
understand that when to
prorities
which life
first
.
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IELTS essay Many people beleive that we should protect all wild animals while other believe we should just protect some of them. discuss bith views and give your opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
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