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Economists often assume that high inflation is caused by an oversupply of money. When the overall price rises, a single currency can buy less goods and services than it used to, so inflation reflects a decline in purchasing power per unit, meaning the curency is devaluated. But why do some people make so much money still work a lot? . Perhaps they have ambition, they want to get richer. Having money will help people to live more comfortable
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assume that high inflation
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of money. When the
overall
price rises, a single currency can
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buy
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less
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goods
and services than it
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used
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so
inflation reflects a decline in purchasing power per unit, meaning the
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curency
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devaluated
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why do
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some
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people
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make
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so
much money
still
work a lot?
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.
Perhaps they have ambition, they want to
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get
richer. Having money will
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help
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people
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comfortable

IELTS essay Many people are working longer hours

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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