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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own jRoXp
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As an
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economic
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government
Growth to in growth plays vital rite for initiate new
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projeck
top in development.
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eremony
also
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assits
to eradicate
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some
major problem of transportation, plantation of projects for
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hyd
power and
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se
on. This essay will
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diwas
about
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Šome
the goals for
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govem
regiment along with
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economic
progress
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One
the one hand
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Some
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people
perceive that the most crucial goal for
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government
should be progress
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economic
condition. As
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elummin
progress of country can eradicate
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some of major
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prabisin
such as problem of electricity
For instance
, to implement
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hydro power
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pufcit
huge amount of investment Country could chance needed and it
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susce
goes well, whole
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get
benefit of and
also
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many
students, workers, time.
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Economic
greedy in might
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žme
:
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Economic
to work or growth not
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only
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helps
to implant various projects
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but


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palso
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a an
aid to eradicate poverty.
On the other hand
,
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some
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people
claim
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that
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IELTS essay Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own

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