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Many goods transported for a long distance do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Many goods transported for a long distance do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages jd0r8
nowadays work has no age limit but some person think no one should work after the age of 65 but today's technology increasing rapidly everyone can do a job anywhere but some people say they should continue the work as far is they want On the one hand people say no one should work in old age because it when the person come into the old age their mind and healthy don't to work properly many people are suffering from disease in old age so they need to relax in the old age however people in young age have extrem power as compared to old age as the facts stands that old people strive more in old age on the other hand some people says old people should continue the work as far as they want for instance many people belong to the middle-class family and they need money for survive in present time so they can continue their work is far they want people in old age can do office job in any company for long time certain anecdotal evidence proves that many people after the age of 65 become a good scientist like APJ Abdul Kalam and Albert Einstein In my opinion people should do job is a long they want if we will not join the job then we can suffer from disease and mental stress to sum up the given full paragraphs I would like to elaborate my opinion people should do job after the age of 65 because job reduce over stress on to mind
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IELTS essay Many goods transported for a long distance do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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