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Thanks to the biomedical Science department I accepted 1st round of the GKS but unfortunately, I was not among the two passed applicants from Iran. I was upset and heartbroken but when I see this Email today I am hoping again to study at my dreaming university and my favorite lab The BEST_KNU scholarship is a very valuable opportunity for me and I would like to apply for it, Thank you so much for supporting me to be in the Cell Immunology lab I have some questions Is the admission for the 2021 Fall semester or 2022 Spring semester What is the least GPA to Keep getting the scholarship Is it possible to participate in the Korean language evening program to improve my Korean language skills Do I have to mail my documents again or with the GKS application form I can apply for the BEST_KNU scholarship
Thanks to the biomedical Science department I
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accepted
1st round of the
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GKS
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but
unfortunately, I was not among the two passed applicants from Iran. I
was upset
and heartbroken
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but
when I
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see
this Email
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today
I am hoping again to study at my dreaming university and my favorite
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lab


The
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BEST_KNU
scholarship is a
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very
valuable opportunity for me and I would like to apply for it, Thank you
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so
much for supporting me to be in the Cell Immunology lab

I have
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some
questions

Is the admission for the 2021 Fall semester or 2022 Spring semester

What is the least GPA to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Keep
getting the scholarship

Is it possible to participate in the Korean language evening program to
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improve
my Korean language
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skills


Do I
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have to
mail my documents again or with the
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GKS
application form I can apply for the
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BEST_KNU
scholarship
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IELTS essay Email to a university professor

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
146 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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