Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Many companies use advertising to increase sales. What are the main reasons that make advertisement effective? Is it good or bad for the society?

Many companies use advertising to increase sales. What are the main reasons that make advertisement effective? Is it good or bad for the society? BkGw

The advertisement is hailed as one of the most effective tools for promoting sales of a product and thereby helps an organisation to thrive rapidly. Even though advertisements in some cases cause the wastage of money, it has far more beneﬁts for the society. This essay is an attempt to discuss the ways to make an advertisement more real and fascinating and also lists down some merits it provides to the society. For an advertisement to be effective, it should target the right people. To exemplify, the ads of toys or other related items should be shown on kids channels only. Secondly, famous celebrities have to be chosen as the brand ambassadors for enhancing the sale of quality products. Moreover, before the ads are released on any platform, they must be reviewed to ensure that their content does not violate morality or ethics. This is because ads with offensive or sensitive content are more likely to be banned. Last but not least, the ads have to be trustworthy instead of being incredible. To continue, the advertisement has several beneﬁts for the society. For example, it makes the people aware of new products on the market. Apart from this, the ads render tens of thousands of employment opportunities for many people. In addition, ads make the people familiar with the things or accessories which make their life more comfortable and easier. For example, the invention of modern machines has made the human life uncomplicated and hassle free. To sum up, the advertisement not only promotes the sale of products but also benefits the whole society. Moreover, it is anticipated that by utilization of more attractive strategies advertisements would become more acceptable

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisement
is hailed
 as one of the most effective tools for promoting sales of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 and thereby This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 an Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
 to thrive rapidly
. Even though
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisements
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 cases cause the wastage of money, it has far more The word 'beneﬁts' contains a ligature (joined letters). Modern English does not usually use ligatures. A ligature in a word causes a spelling error. If the word is an English  word, write it with standard characters.
beneﬁts
 for the society. This essay is an attempt to discuss the ways to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisement
 more real and fascinating and also
 lists down This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 merits it provides to the society.

For an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisement
 to be effective, it should target the right You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. To exemplify, the ads of toys or other related items should be shown
 on kids channels This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
. Secondly
, Consider using "celebrities".celebrities
famous celebrities
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
be chosen
 as the brand ambassadors for enhancing the sale of quality You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
. Moreover
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the ads are released
 on any platform, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be reviewed
 to ensure that their content does not violate morality or ethics. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 ads with offensive or sensitive content are more likely to be banned
. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, the ads This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be trustworthy instead
 of being incredible.

To continue, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisement
 has several The word 'beneﬁts' contains a ligature (joined letters). Modern English does not usually use ligatures. A ligature in a word causes a spelling error. If the word is an English  word, write it with standard characters.
beneﬁts
 for the society. For example
, it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
makes
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 aware of new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 on the market. Apart from this, the ads render tens of thousands of employment opportunities for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. In addition
, ads You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 familiar with the things or accessories which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 their life more comfortable and easier. For example
, the invention of modern machines has made the human life uncomplicated and hassle free.

To sum up, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisement
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 promotes the sale of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 benefits the whole society. Moreover
, it is anticipated
 that by utilization of more attractive strategies You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexhibitannouncementnoticeliteraturepublicitypublication
advertisements
 would become more acceptable