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Many businesses find it very difficult to assign enough time and resources to research and development. What could a government do to encourage more company spending in this area?

In the current era, one of the most debated issue is about growing business. The business takes a lot of effort and time to grow. It is evident that without government help it is next to impossible to expand the business. This essay will discuss the several solutions which the government could do to encourage small businesses. To begin with, there are several problems faced while expanding the business. The first and foremost expect to point out in this context is that get appropriate resources on time. Many times not getting resources at the perfect time is a big concern. Like by last, month in Mumbai courier delivery agency not got their vehicles on time and they faced a big loss in their businesses. Secondly availability and quality of raw material, some companies need good raw material for their product also the availability of raw materials directly affect the overall price of the product. To exemplify, in last month sanitizer makers need more alcohol for their products however in the market the availability of row alcohol was very low so availability of sanitizer also low in market therefor the prices were touching to the sky. On the other hand, there are numbers of solutions that the government should provide to avoid mismanagement in businesses and improve their stake in the market. Firstly the government should provide an open market to buy resources. In recent time companies do their business in under government rules and regulation government, Also take a big portion from their earning but the government need to give some freedom to do business. For example, in recent time government charge a high amount of customs duty on import materials which should be do reduced in order to help companies. To conclude the government could encourage business is to reducing tax and provide resources in an easy way.
In the
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era, one of the most debated issue is about growing
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business
. The
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business
takes
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a lot of
effort and
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time
to grow. It is evident that without
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government
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help
it is
next
to impossible to expand the
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business
. This essay will discuss the several solutions which the
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government
could do to encourage
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small
businesses.

To
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begin
with, there are several problems faced while expanding the
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business
. The
first
and foremost
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expect
to point out in this context is that
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get
appropriate resources on
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time
.
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Many
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times
not getting resources at the perfect
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time
is a
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big
concern. Like by last, month in Mumbai courier delivery agency not
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got
their vehicles on
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time and
they faced a
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big
loss in their businesses.

Secondly
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availability
and quality of raw
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material
,
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some
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companies
need
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good
raw
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material
for their product
also
the
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availability
of raw
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materials
directly
affect the
overall
price of the product. To exemplify, in last month sanitizer makers need more alcohol for their products
however
in the
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market
the
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availability
of row alcohol was
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very
low
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so
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availability
of sanitizer
also
low in
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market
therefor the prices were touching to the sky.
On the other hand
, there are numbers of solutions that the
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government
should provide to avoid mismanagement in
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businesses
and
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improve
their stake in the
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market
.
Firstly
the
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government
should provide an open
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market
to
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buy
resources. In recent
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time
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companies
do their
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business
in under
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government
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rules
and regulation
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government
,
Also
take a
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big
portion from their earning
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but
the
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government
need to give
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some
freedom to do
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business
.
For example
, in recent
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time
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government
charge a high amount of customs duty on import
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materials
which should be
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do
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reduced
in order to
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help
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companies
.

To conclude
the
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government
could encourage
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business
is to
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reducing
tax and provide resources
Consider replacing this phrase with the adverb “easily” to avoid wordiness.
in an easy way
.
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IELTS essay Many businesses find it very difficult to assign enough time and resources to research and development. What could a government do to encourage more company spending in this area?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6.0
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