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Many are of the opinion that hunting is an outdated practice and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the past few decades, online games have exponentially multiplied to the point that there are now several e-sports which can emulate the excitement of primitive life. In Tokyo, for example, one of the biggest attractions is a 3D game center that allows people to experience the fear of being chased by dinosaurs. With modern tools, pursuing and killing has become digital. In the past few decades, online games have exponentially multiplied to the point that there are now several e-sports which can emulate the excitement of primitive life. In Tokyo, for example, one of the biggest attractions is a 3D game center that allows people to experience the fear of being chased by dinosaurs. With modern tools, pursuing and killing has become digital.
In the past few decades, online
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games
have
exponentially
multiplied to the point that there are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
several e-sports which can emulate the excitement of primitive life. In Tokyo,
for example
, one of the biggest attractions is a 3D game center that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to experience the fear of
being chased
by dinosaurs. With modern tools, pursuing and killing has become digital.

In the past few decades, online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
games
have
exponentially
multiplied to the point that there are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
several e-sports which can emulate the excitement of primitive life. In Tokyo,
for example
, one of the biggest attractions is a 3D game center that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to experience the fear of
being chased
by dinosaurs. With modern tools, pursuing and killing has become digital.
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IELTS essay Many are of the opinion that hunting is an outdated practice and should be banned.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
124 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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