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Manufacturing of fish pies

Manufacturing of fish pies 566qe

The picture illustrates the process of manufacturing frozen fish pies on a commercial scale which involves 2 separate production lines for the end product. Overall, the potatoes are processed through automated machines whereas the salmon fish requires some of the manual labor help in the complete process. On one side of the plant, the potatoes are kept in storage up to a month in advance which is then diluted in the conveyor belt where the cleaning process is initiated. Further, the potato is peeled and sliced into a wedges-like shape. Moreover, the batch of the vegetable is boiled in hot water for few minutes and is then chilled at low temperatures. At the end of the belt, the potatoes are store and sent further for processing. Parallelly, fresh salmon is brought into the manufacturing plant in less than 12 hours. The fish is marinated with lime juice. salt and passed through the steam oven. Afterward, the skin and bones are separated by the workers, and the batch is inspected by the supervisor. The cooked peas prepared sauce, and potato is mixed with the fish. The pies are wrapped by hand and are refrigerated and store in the warehouse.

The picture illustrates the process of manufacturing frozen fish pies on a commercial scale which involves 2 separate production lines for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 product.

Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
are processed
 through automated machines whereas the salmon fish requires If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 manual labor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in the complete process.

On one side of the plant, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in storage up to a month in advance which is then diluted in the conveyor belt where the cleaning process is initiated
. Further
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
is peeled
 and sliced into a wedges-like shape. Moreover
, the batch of the vegetable is boiled
 in hot water for few minutes and is then chilled at low temperatures. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the belt, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
 are store and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
further
 for processing.

Possible spelling mistake found.ParallelParallelsParalleled
Parallelly
, fresh salmon is brought
 into the manufacturing plant in less than 12 hours. The fish is marinated
 with lime juice. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSalt
salt
 and passed through the steam oven. Afterward, the skin and bones are separated
 by the workers, and the batch is inspected
 by the supervisor. The cooked peas prepared sauce, and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
is mixed
 with the fish. The pies are wrapped
 by hand and are refrigerated
 and store in the warehouse. 