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Manufacturing instant noodles

Manufacturing instant noodles Wx6K
Have you ever tasted instant noodles? I guess everyone does. Let us learn how delicious instant noodles get prepared in this essay. The given figure depicts the making of instant noodles which involves 8 total steps. In the initial step, manufacturer gets flour from the storage silos. The flour gets fed to the mixer along with water and oil in the second step which results in a dough. The dough later passes into rollers which forms dough sheets. Dough sheets turn into dough strips in the fourth step. Noodle discs get made from the strips in the following step. The formed discs then gets cooked with oil and gets dried in next step. Unlike packed noodles, these come out in cups with vegetables and spices mixed in the next phase. Labelling and sealing completes the eight step manufacturing process. To wrap it all up, I can say instant noodles making includes additional steps than the traditional ones which definitely enlarges the process, price and quality.
Have you ever tasted instant
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noodles
? I guess everyone does.
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Let
us learn how delicious instant
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noodles
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get
prepared in this essay. The
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given
figure depicts the making of instant
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noodles
which involves 8 total steps.

In the initial
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step
, manufacturer
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gets
flour from the storage silos. The flour
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gets
fed to the mixer along with water and oil in the second
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step
which results in a
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dough
. The
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dough
later passes into rollers which forms
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dough
sheets.
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Dough
sheets turn into
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dough
strips in the fourth
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step
.
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Noodle
discs
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get
made from the strips in the following
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step
. The formed discs then
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gets
cooked with oil and
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dried in
next
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step
. Unlike packed
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noodles
, these
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come
out in cups with vegetables and spices mixed in the
next
phase. Labelling and sealing completes the eight
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step
manufacturing process.

To wrap it all up, I can say instant
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noodles
making includes additional
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steps
than the traditional ones which definitely enlarges the process, price and quality.
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IELTS essay Manufacturing instant noodles

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
165 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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