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Living in big cities is becoming difficult or easier. Discuss both views .

It is a controversial issue whether living in cities is becoming difficult or not. I will discuss both views. Let us deliberate a number of compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference. To begin with, there are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the given proclivity. Discussing the first view, the most intrinsic one is that pollution. Although pollution is rampant problem in the world which causes many health ailments. For instance asthma, cardiovascular diseases as well as lung cancer and many more. When, nowadays majority of multitudes are migrate from urban areas as compared to rural areas. Consequently, humans face traffic problem.
It is a controversial issue whether living in cities is becoming difficult or not. I will discuss both views.
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us deliberate a number of compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference.

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with, there are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the
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proclivity. Discussing the
first
view, the most intrinsic one is that pollution.
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Although
pollution is rampant problem in the world which causes
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many
health ailments.
For instance
asthma, cardiovascular diseases
as well
as lung cancer and
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many
more. When, nowadays
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majority of
multitudes are
Consider using a past participle here: "migrated".
migrate
from urban areas as compared to rural areas.
Consequently
, humans face traffic problem.
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IELTS essay Living in big cities is becoming difficult or easier.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
106 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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