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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement BVO6
Living in foreign country has its own benefits and drawbacks, however we respect the country cultures and habits. In the below paragraph I will be explaining about the social problems and I will be talking about the practical problems faced. The General social problem faced by many people is language and accent. If the person is not much familiar with language it would be difficult for him/her to understand and as well as express their views. Sometimes the people who come from different country will have different accent and they try to immitate the accent of local people. They feel very offened. The tome of the person may also lead to serious social problems. For example, some countries speak very politely and say thing differently. We should respect their culture and habits so that it wouldn’t create much problem. Coming to practical problem, againn not knowing the language in the work place will lead the person to serious problem. For example, a person who is not familiar with the language does a part time in a coffee shop would be difficult to communicate with the employees and as well as customers while taking the order. In order to work in these kind of places where communication plays a vital role they should be familiar with the language. There might be misunderstanding or miscommunication which leads to other problems. Another change of facing a practical problem is not aware of the country’s rules. For example, while driving to a particular place, the person should be familiar with the country’s driving rules and regulations. Otherwise he/she might get into trouble. I would like to conclude that the person should be aware of the language or basic information like rules before going to any other foreign country. Then the person will have few chances of facing problems. If they are not familiar they will face lot of problems socially as well as practically.
Living in foreign
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has its
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benefits and drawbacks,
however
we respect the
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country
cultures and habits. In the below paragraph I will be explaining about the social
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problems
and I will be talking about the practical
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problems
faced.

The General social
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problem
faced by
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many
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people
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is
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language
and accent. If the
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person
is not much
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familiar
with
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language
it would be difficult for him/her to understand and
as well
as express their views.
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Sometimes
the
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people
who
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come
from
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different
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country
will have
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different
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accent and
they try to
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immitate
the accent of local
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people
. They feel
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very
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offened
. The tome of the
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person
may
also
lead to serious social
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problems
.
For example
,
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some
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countries
speak
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very
politely
and say thing
differently
. We should respect their culture and habits
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so
that it wouldn’t create much problem.

Coming to practical
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problem
,
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againn
not knowing the
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language
in the work place will lead the
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person
to serious
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problem
.
For example
, a
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person
who is not
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familiar
with the
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language
does a
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part time
in a coffee shop would be difficult to communicate with the employees and
as well
as customers while taking the order. In order to work in
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these kind
of places where communication plays a vital role they should be
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familiar
with the
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language
. There might be misunderstanding or miscommunication which leads to other problems.

Another
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change
of facing a practical
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is not aware of the
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country’s
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rules
.
For example
, while driving to a particular place, the
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person
should be
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familiar
with the
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country’s
driving
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rules
and regulations.
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Otherwise
he/she might
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get
into trouble.

I would like
to conclude
that the
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person
should be aware of the
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language
or basic information like
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rules
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before
going to any other foreign
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country
. Then the
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person
will have few chances of facing
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problems
. If they are not
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familiar
they will face
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lot of
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problems
socially
as well
as
practically
.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
320 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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