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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement. 0YaB
These days, more and more people are immigrating to new countries to start a new life. It has been suggested that the language barrier can cause significant problems in their social interactions, as well as issues in everyday life. I partially agree with this idea, and in this essay I will provide some argument to support my opinion. Generally speaking, there are a wide range of reasons why people believe that the inability to speak a local language can cause serious problem. From a practical point of view, the primary argument supporting this idea is that it will be difficult to find a job. If the immigrants cannot speak the local language, it is highly unlikely that they will get hired because they will not able to communicate with colleagues and clients. From a social point of view, another key argument in support of this idea is that it will be difficult to make friends. The result of this is that people will feel lonely, isolated and alienated which in turn leads to personal problems such as depression and alcoholism. However, it must be said there are several arguments against the idea that poor language ability can cause problems. Perhaps the strongest of these is that English is a universal language. If people can speak English, they might be able to communicate efficiently in most countries. In conclusion, in today’s globalized world, learning a new language is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. I believe quite strongly that the language barrier can cause some serious issues. If persons move to another countries and they cannot speak language at all, life will be quite difficult for them, both socially and practically
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are immigrating to new countries to
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start
a new life. It has
been suggested
that the
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language
barrier can
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cause
significant
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problems
in their social interactions,
as well
as issues in everyday life. I
partially
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idea
, and in this essay I will provide
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argument
to support my opinion.

Generally
speaking, there are a wide range of reasons why
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people
believe that the inability to
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speak
a local
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language
can
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cause
serious
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problem
. From a practical point of view, the primary
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argument
supporting this
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idea
is that it will be difficult to find a job. If the immigrants cannot
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speak
the local
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language
, it is
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unlikely that they will
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hired
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because
they will not able to communicate with colleagues and clients. From a social point of view, another key
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argument
in support of this
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idea
is that it will be difficult to
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make
friends. The result of this is that
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people
will feel lonely, isolated and alienated which in turn leads to personal
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problems
such as depression and alcoholism.

However
, it
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must
be said
there are several
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arguments
against the
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idea
that poor
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language
ability can
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cause
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problems
. Perhaps the strongest of these is that English is a universal
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language
. If
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people
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speak
English, they might be able to communicate
efficiently
in most countries.

In conclusion
, in
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today
’s globalized world, learning a new
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language
is a topic which is
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very
relevant to modern society. I believe quite
strongly
that the
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language
barrier can
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cause
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some
serious issues. If persons
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move
to another
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countries and
they cannot
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speak
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at all, life will be quite difficult for them, both
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practically
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. with this statement.

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4 paragraphs
282 words
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