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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disgree with this statement?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. POBd
In recent days, problems of living abroad has been a topic of heated debate. It has been said that living in a foreign country would be problematic because of lack of speaking practices and understanding other people, which is not often seen as preferable to living hometown. I feel that adaptation of communication skills is a vital difficulty of any people living a foreing country, but the benefits of living there for learning language cannot be ignored. Perhaps most compelling reason why people living in abroad will face serious language problems is because of detrimental effects that a disfunctional communication skill can have on the life standarts. A robust and communucation skill with neighbors, colleagues and other citizens is a cornerstone of any society, and if foreigners do not converse with these people, then their conficedence will decrease; efficiency in jobs will be lost; and they will have to move another countries. This would lead to cause some ecomical problems, which in turn mean higher crime level, a vicious cycle would begin. However, drawbacks of living in abroad should not be viewed in isolation. Another particularly essential part of living abroad is the education. The most obivous benefit of educating a foreign country is that it leads to having far better knowledge of 4 basic language skills and understanding cultures where you are studying, which in turn lead to a more skilled workers for both your country and your living country. Unless people move to abroud for educational and business purposes, the next generations will face lack of empathy with forigners. My opinion is that living in a foreign country is made up of some disadvantages, and trying one of these disadvantages such as communicaion skills and cultural differences will cause a much better world order, and also the advanatges of that cannot be understated. I, therefore, feel that living a foreign country for especially short-term like educational purposes should receive priority.
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has been a topic of heated debate. It has
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living
in a
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foreign
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country
would be problematic
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because
of lack of speaking practices and understanding other
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, which is not
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often
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seen
as preferable to
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hometown. I feel that adaptation of communication
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skills
is a vital difficulty of any
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people
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foreing
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,
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the benefits of
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living
there for learning language cannot be
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ignored
.

Perhaps most compelling reason why
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living
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abroad
will face serious language problems is
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because
of detrimental effects that a
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disfunctional
communication
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skill
can have on the life
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standarts
. A robust and
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communucation
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skill
with neighbors, colleagues and other citizens is a cornerstone of any society, and if foreigners do not converse with these
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people
, then their
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conficedence
will decrease; efficiency in jobs will
be lost
; and they will
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have to
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move
another
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countries
. This would lead to cause
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ecomical
problems, which in turn mean higher crime level, a vicious cycle would
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begin
.

However
, drawbacks of
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living
in
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abroad
should not
be viewed
in isolation. Another
particularly
essential part of
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living
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abroad
is the education. The most
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obivous
benefit of educating a
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foreign
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country
is that it leads to having far better knowledge of 4 basic language
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skills
and understanding cultures where you are studying, which in turn lead to a more skilled workers for both your
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country
and your
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living
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country
. Unless
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people
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move
to
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abroud
for educational and business purposes, the
next
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forigners
.

My opinion is that
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in a
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foreign
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country
is made
up of
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some
disadvantages, and trying one of these disadvantages such as
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communicaion
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skills
and cultural differences will cause a much better world order, and
also
the
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advanatges
of that cannot
be understated
. I,
therefore
, feel that
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living
a
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foreign
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country
for
especially
short-term like educational purposes should receive priority.
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IELTS essay Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems.

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