Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Living a country as a foreigner can lead to serious social and practical problems.

Living a country as a foreigner can lead to serious social and practical problems. VY2GJ

There is no consensus on whether living in a country as a foreigner can lead to serious social and practical problems. I agree with the opinion that moving to another country can cause various problems in daily activities. First of all, one of the biggest difficulties of immigrants is the language barrier. If a person is incapable of speaking a foreign language in a different country, he or she will face some troubles. For example, if he or she goes to a restaurant, it is difficult to order food from the menu because he or she may not understand the language on the menu. Another example is that he or she may not drive a car for the simple reason that he or she cannot read the word on the traffic sign. Secondly, it is hard to find a great job if the foreigner’s second language is not fluent. A lot of foreigners cannot apply for high-paid jobs since most of these jobs require language competence. For instance, employees in companies including Google, Microsoft, and Amazon often need to communicate with clients as well as teammates. If a person’s English is not fluent enough, it may lead to some communication problems. Finally, people maybe feel lonely moving overseas. When people move to a new country, it is hard to make new friends when their English is not great because it takes a long time to let others understand what he or she is really saying. To sum up, I am in complete agreement with the fact that speaking a foreign language can cause some serious issues.

There is no consensus on whether living in a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 as a foreigner can lead to serious social and practical problems. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the opinion that moving to another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 can cause various problems in daily activities.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, one of the biggest difficulties of immigrants is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 barrier. If a person is incapable of speaking a foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
, he or she will face This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 troubles. For example
, if he or she goes to a restaurant, it is difficult to order food from the menu This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he or she may not understand the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 on the menu. Another example is that he or she may not drive a car for the simple reason that he or she cannot read the word on the traffic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
.

Secondly
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to find a great job if the foreigner’s second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 is not fluent. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
A lot of
 foreigners cannot apply for high-paid jobs since most of these jobs require You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 competence. For instance
, employees in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 including Google, Microsoft, and Amazon This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 need to communicate with clients as well
 as teammates. If a person’s English is not fluent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
, it may lead to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 communication problems.

Finally
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 maybe feel lonely moving overseas. When This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 new friends when their English is not great This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it takes a long time to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 others understand what he or she is really
 saying.

To sum up, I am in complete agreement with the fact that speaking a foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsounddialectstylejargonwordvocabulary
language
 can cause This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 serious issues. 